The reveal of the redhead boy on this bus and connecting that to the hit and run referenced earlier was simultaneously gutting and satisfying. I'm particularly fascinated with how sensual the writing is. The hot sticky environment; the dreadlocks escaping their bun; the boy's dry cracked lip splitting to release a drop of blood.
Every word of this packed such a punch. Thank you so much for sharing your work!
Your writing is so tactile and sensory. Really, really enjoyed everything about this.
The reveal of the redhead boy on this bus and connecting that to the hit and run referenced earlier was simultaneously gutting and satisfying. I'm particularly fascinated with how sensual the writing is. The hot sticky environment; the dreadlocks escaping their bun; the boy's dry cracked lip splitting to release a drop of blood.